I'm sure this is great advice, but I'm not a writer. I write once and then publish. I was an English teacher for many years so that might explain it. I'm a better editor than writer and I laughed when you misspelled grammar with an er. Naturally I corrected it for you. No other errors. That's why I was chosen as an editor. I only write for fun. I love how you answer every single prompt in a fun manner and involve the reader in your hectic life at the same time. I hope Molly's eye condition improves. That might have been mentioned in your last post. ;-)